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CBD-paris 1

CBD-paris 1
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Copyright: Danielle Dupre (ddupre2) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 457 W: 61 N: 215] (8136)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-07-13
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/15 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Paris toujours
Date Submitted: 2010-08-08 0:50
Viewed: 1556
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
take a walk in CBD in Paris ... 1
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i wish you had tilted the image more towards the corner so the point of the metal bar has a stronger direction. I also wonder had you played around with the focus if you could have separated the metal sculpture from the building making it stand out even more. there are nice elements in here for a strong photograph. i like it but i know you could have presented a picture with more impact. nice job.

Bonjour Danielle,
J'aime beaucoup la position de l'édifice dans la composition. Les couleurs sont très jolies et j'aime beaucoup le reflet des nuages dans les vitres.
Merci et bonne soirée.

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