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Copyright: Bebed Praja (BebedPra) Silver Note Writer [C: 0 W: 0 N: 11] (277)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-04-03
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 50 D, Canon EF 16-35mm f/2.8 L
Exposure: f/2, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2010-06-18 Music [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-06-19 3:20
Viewed: 2137
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
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Hi Bebed Praja,

This is absolutely a master piece by you, the theme of it the boy with a violin, the colors, though its been post processed very wisely.

The only weakness I see in it is the toes of the boy been cut.

Abid Changazi

Hi Bebed
a fascinating presentation. I like the artistic approach.
perfect management of light.
splendid composition.
magnificent colors.
great entry to Music theme.
compliments
tsilla

une merveilleuse lumière Bebed,

congratulations,

dd

What A beautiful photograph. Interesting subject, lovely light, composed thoughtfully. Very nice!

Ciao Bebed,

the light is fabulous and the colors are warm and natural, the subject is perfectly framed.
Bravo!

TFS
Saluti dall'Italia
bruno

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 47 N: 1333] (7051)
  • [2010-06-19 8:33]

Hi Bebed !
What a wonderful scene!
Excellent portrait of this young artist. The subject is perfectly placed in the picture. I like the fabulous light and the blurry b/G. Perfect details.
Great work: congratulations.
Ciao! Vanda

Welcome on TL: my best wishes

Hi Bebed,

Lovely image,great soft warm light and a perfect out of focus background.

Douglas

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  • rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)
  • [2010-06-19 10:24]

Beautiful scene, very good and moody light,
regards
Ryszard

Hello Bebed

An awesome capture here of this child. This image is a keeper for sure.

jimmy

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  • akg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 305 W: 0 N: 171] (2264)
  • [2010-06-19 12:07]

Hello Bebed!
This is a wonderful photograph! Excellent sense of belonging, lovely meaningful work! I love the tone, the light, the expression over the boy's face and the overall composition.
Great work!!
Regards, abhijit.

Bo atrde Bebed
Very well composed and beatiful composition...there is a tender mood looking and listen kids played...It is great hope to the futur ...Good sharpness, warm colors, very poetic image to the theme.
Well come. Nice to meet you.
Teresa

Bonjour Bebed
Superbe image de cet enfant violoniste.Belle attitude et belle ambiance pleine de douceur et de sensibilité.Bravo pour cette contribution au thème.Catherine

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  • CMJC Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 154 W: 193 N: 124] (1187)
  • [2010-06-20 23:20]

j'aime beaucoup la composition de la photo et sa douce lumière notamment

en revanche question musique la tenue du violon et de l'archet me semblent incorectes et je ne sais si l'enfant joue de la musique ou simplement pose pour une belle photo;
mais qu'importe en fait puisque justement le résultat est une bien belle photo ☺

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 451 W: 139 N: 813] (5358)
  • [2010-06-20 23:40]

Wooow, what a beautfiful shot! I love the tones and colours in this photo! The colours create a marvellous mood!
Great composition with the oy on the left site of the photo.

Janneke

This kind of photos are the ones that touch my soul, heart and mind. I want to keep the image to look at it for a long time. Beautiful composition, theme and colors. TFS

Lorena

I like this photo beautiful colors

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  • tribord Gold Star Critiquer [C: 85 W: 91 N: 296] (895)
  • [2010-06-22 7:44]
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Bonjour Bebed,

You managed to take a good shot here. The composotion is somehow classic and it works well. There is a slight overerposure on the head of the boy, but I guess it is not that important.
Your model is trying to do is best so the mood is fine but unfortunately, ther is no way he can play violin like this. These are details, but only one member pointed them, too bad if you start counting the "awesome" number of adjectives used to critique your photo. Poor people; do you really think they looked at your picture?

You may say that the mood count first, but it has to be a little bit real too. A few things to correct are:
the head is on the wrong side (should be on the left)
He can certainly not move his hand because it lays on his leg!
he grips the bow too strongly.
Said this, your work on the subject and the interaction with the scennery is harmonized.
What kind of post-processing did you do here?
How much did you levelled the colors?

Sometimes, a few notes would help...

Au plaisir,

Damien (point system off)

Hi Bebed
Amazing shot of this small boy while playing Violin
Great light, colors and focus with well-blurred background
It is somehow obvious that the boy just posing not a real musician, but this is'nt count down your tallented work
Thanks
Alireza

I've just discovered you wonderful gallery.
Full of great works

congrats and thanks,
v

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