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Délicatesse IV...

Délicatesse IV...
Photo Information
Copyright: Catherine Vincent (reggaetime) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 610 W: 138 N: 1019] (6525)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-05-29
Categories: Nature, Macro
Camera: OLYMPUS SP 590UZ
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Delicatesse [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-06-01 1:26
Viewed: 1531
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
J'aime la délicatesse de cette composition et j'espère que ça vous plaira aussi.

I like the delicacy of this composition and I hope you enjoy it too.
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Bonjour Catherine
N'est-ce pas la piéride (dite du chou)? si délicate au milieu de ces fragiles , tendres, timides , délicieuses petites fleurs que par ta composition mais aussi ta lumière tu a su rendre "telles qu'en elles-mêmes enfin" au milieu de ces graminées.

Bonjour Catherine,

This is a great macro shot with very nice composition.
Excellent focus and sharpness.
Nice natural light and colors.

Warm greetings and best wishes,

Bonjour Catherine,

A wonderful work, perfect in terms of light distribution, sharpness and DOF, however I feel the butterfly seems to lost in this work, as there is much negetive space around it, thinking that it is placed too centeredly in a thin lining bordered frame. I am not a fan of such frame but it is a minor issue.

I tried a WS on your wonderful work, to award butterfly its deserving place in a natural frame. I have explained in detail how and why I need a change in your lovely work.

I hope you like it.

best greetings,

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-06-01 2:34]

Hi Catherine,
A very delicate and tender macro of this white butterfly sitting on these small white flowers.
Beautiful blurred light green BG contrasting well with the main subject.
Very sharp presentation with accurate details on the insect and the flowers. Great use of shallow focusing.
My best regards,

Francis Xavier

Ciao Catherine

Simplicity rules!
The pin sharp pattern and fine colour reproduction makes this a treat to my eyes, and the insect stands well on the contrasting green background...
Absolutely nice for look at.
Very well done,

Best regards,


Hi Catherine,
You're right, it is very delicate and so lovely. The little red bead in the center, in my POV, adds a special touch. The blurred BG is simply marvellous.

It's a beautiful and romantic arrangement.
Hi Catherine, I love the moment and the light, also the good contrast of the white flowers and the fresh green BG.
You captrued this cute butterfly with good sharpness, very well done, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-06-01 10:26]

Hello Catherine

Doubel merveilleuse amcro, quelle finesse sur ce papillon et la fleur, le petite fleur toutes douce, toute délicate, le fon est parfait avec de lingées vertes, splendide.

Merci et amitié


Bonjour Catherine,
Délicatesse est bien le mot pour définir cette photo!
Ce papillon a l'air d'une demoiselle en crinoline s'accrochant à une escarpolette fleurie.
Superbe composition
Merci du partage

Bonsoir Catherine,

J'aime beaucoup l'effet des herbes qui se croisent et les pendentifs.
Glissé entre les fleurs mi-closes, le papillon joue le charmeur en bûtinant celle toute épanouie.
Gracieuse luminosité, jolie composition. Bonne BG et les couleurs sont superbes.
Bravo, bonne nuit.
Amitiés. Yolande

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1523 W: 73 N: 86] (20294)
  • [2010-06-01 22:28]

dear Catherine,
both little white flowers and graceful white butterfly are co-making splendidly beautiful and peaceful scene,
delicate light, still air and settled time are crystallization in this picture,
thank you for your excellent art work,

très jolie composition la finesse des fleurs est bien mise en valeur la couleur fait ressortir la douceur du papillon .
Bonne journée Marilène.

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2010-06-03 7:37]

Hi Catherine,
Very delicate indeed.I like the softness, not only of the flowers but also of the butterfly.Nature is indeed grand,I thought at first the butterfly was another blossom,it blends so well amongst the other blossoms I guess it's natures way of protecting it from harm.A perfect placement resulting in a strong composition,your Depth Of Field with its softer background, really makes the main subjects stand out.

jolie composition, Catherine, le papillon ajoute vraiment à la scène
je verrais un format vertical avec la branche de droite effacée
voir le workshop

Hello Catherine,
I like your style very much. Decided to look for your best photo but it was not possible. They are all so beautiful. Not just sharp images but also very well composed with atmosphere, which is rare with close-ups. Yes, the delicateness and also the depth of this image make it special. Well done!

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