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Welcome June!


Welcome June!
Photo Information
Copyright: Usaf Jaffari (Usaf) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 87 N: 312] (2160)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-04-26
Categories: Nature, Macro
Camera: Canon Ixus 960 IS
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-05-29 3:40
Viewed: 1219
Points: 9
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Hi Dear members

this one is for you all, wishing you a beautiful June and thanking for all your wonderful notes to my previous posting.
My best wishes for you all!
Enjoy the beautiful & hot June days!

Have a lovely day :)

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Hello Usaf,
a wonderful flowers, the colours is phantastic and you captured it with good DOF and a nice POV. Thanks for sharing.Best regards Siggi

Hello Usaf,

A nicely cropped flower, putting its centre perfectly in the 'thirds' position of the frame, for strong composition. The b/g, blurred flower gives a good sense of perspective but does not detract from the focal flower.
Perhaps lacking a little sharpness from the centre but otherwise a fine shot.

Have a good w/e,
Bev :-)

Salam Usaf ji,

certainly, this is an immproved composition than your's last one but still it need a facelift as if seen for the focusing among the flower in the FG, I feel it is still lacking the common standards.

As the details are not that well as they should be, this let me to award for the picture only a single point. Hope you don't mind as that is the way I am.

Other than that, the flower in the BG is well-blurred and enhances the beauty of the shot immensely.

best greetings,
Paras

Hi Usaf ,
A beautiful composition with b very nice framing,the repeating flower in BG with shallow depth looks so lovely,nice warm tones with white colors are well captured,a lovely welcome for June.

Thank you for sharing
Have a nice weekend
mushtaq

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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 66 N: 1002] (10644)
  • [2010-05-29 21:15]

Salaam Mama,

Sure, you know the composition that where to place but there are many naa khaanda mulla in our surrounding that they can't follow and talk loud. Thanks GOD that they can't reach to understand rather he could crush us, tough it not too crisp sharp but the bright colours and composition makes this much attracted also a nice example for those whom still don't understand the compo.. :P
Well done, TFS.
Regards.

Musa.

lovely macro nice crop, fantastic macro ,but need some more sharpness i think

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