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Senses - selfportrait


Senses - selfportrait
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Copyright: Robert Nowak (dimeola) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 64 W: 5 N: 61] (856)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-07-26
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Fuji Finepix S5500, Fujinon 37-370mm (Eq.)
Exposure: f/2.9, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): teaching photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-07-27 11:28
Viewed: 1613
Points: 24
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"Senses - selfportrait"

A couple of words regarding above picture. I really like taking B&W portraits. They are always full of expresson and mistery.
In "Senses" you can see my faithful, persistent model MYSELF...

best regards

dimeola

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I love the triangular shape to this you have accomplished by your hand. If you study your hand and the point of the triangle it leads straight to your eye. Nice composition. Would look a tiny bit more dramatically if you adjusted the contrast to show more of the white of your eye. Perhaps a bit more focus on your eye too. Good choice of B&W. Subconsciously sort of like a tarantula before it strikes its prey. Well done.

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  • jajko Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 13 N: 11] (168)
  • [2005-07-27 11:46]

no . dobre. widze ze twoja wizja swiata staje sie coraz bogatsza. pozdrawiam i czekam na jeszcze.

Very original and well performed. I like it.

Congrats

Marco

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  • afoni Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 0] (1719)
  • [2005-07-27 12:36]

Different point of view.Cong...

Interesting! very original. I like the good control of DOF. Good contrast and lighting too. Very nice. JP

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 61 N: 169] (29410)
  • [2005-07-27 15:11]

Very original this POV Robert, I like the lightning coming from the left side and the opposite side in the dark almost half/half give a well balanced shot.

Hello Robert, a very interesting composition with a good control of the DoF. Great lighting, good use of b/w.
Sarolta

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1885 W: 243 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2005-07-27 17:56]

Interesting and original self-portrait (even we can only see your hand & your eye) with interesting light on the left side of the picture. Good use of B&W and good details on your hand. Well done!

Vey original Robert...this is a very strong portrait...well done!!!

Jos

You have a great idea for a self-portrait!

Your fingers look like you'd make an excellent guitarist.

-agk.

Very original composition. I love the line formed by the shadow which leads to your eye with a very intent gaze

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  • booz Silver Star Critiquer [C: 22 W: 0 N: 1] (643)
  • [2005-07-28 3:34]

Witaj - świetnie wyglądają oczy - jedno bardzo widoczne, drugie wychodzi z ciemnści - super
Pozdrawiam
Tomek
PS - o powierzni juz romawialiśmy :)

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