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My first
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Copyright: Daniele Robichaud (CoolDan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 0 N: 216] (2101)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2010-04-12
Categories: Macro
Camera: Nikon D 300, AF-S VR Micro-NIKKOR 105mm f/2.8G IF-ED
Exposure: f/22, 2 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2010-04-16 5:12
Viewed: 1446
Points: 44
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Hello, Here is my first experience with my new macro lens. It is an adaptation of a very different flowers are still rare 50mm.Les I had to content myself with the branches of trees growing around the house. It's a start, the better is at last coming .....( I hope) Good day.

parasbhalla, scubli, sidhubaba, Teresat, Scharan2, tanburi, solrac, mushtaqhussain has marked this note useful
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To werdir: DiagonalCoolDan 1 04-16 07:48
To gaillarde: Merci du conseilCoolDan 1 04-16 06:11
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Bonjour Daniele,
Excellent! Netteté, compositon, placement dans la toile, le tout c'est très bien fait.
Compliments amicales.
Raimundo

Congratulation on getting new macro lens, Danielle!

This is a beautiful work you produced using new arrival into your camera kit :) The subject itself is very well done however, I am only concerned with the over-colored frame. I do love colors but the frame here seems to overpowering the subject drastically, therefore, i have tried a WS on your work hoping you don't mind.

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful macro from a lovely flower!

Best greetings,
Paras

Bonjour Daniele,

Wow!!! superbe composition lumineuse.
Juste un entourage de cadre foncé serait mieux.
C'est parfait, bravo.
Bon Week-end Danièle.
Amicalement. Yolande

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 897 W: 0 N: 1845] (8705)
  • [2010-04-16 6:05]

Bonjour Daniele,
Une grande classe macro!
La présentation est très bonne. Une expérience très réussie, mes chaleureuses félicitations. En attendant d'autres nouvelles expériences et de nouveaux objectifs.
Une merveilleuse journée,
Adrian

HI
Beautiful Artwork, excellent concept and idea.
Nice exposure and well presented
TFS

Hi Daniele,

A fine first posting with your new macro lens. Pin sharp, with nice lighting and background. Frames are always subject to personal taste, so I think a smaller one would present your photo better. One other thought I had is that it might be nice to shoot this on a diagonal, leading in from the right corner. It's fine as is, just my taste.

Warm regards,
Werner

Nice capture with yours new macro lens.
Beautiful picture with great colors.
Best regards.Alin.

Immaculate focus, very good macro and rich colour..... The macro has blurred the BG well even at f22...

My opinion on frames - black or white!!! Well, my personal opinion anyway ;-)

Cheers
DAvid

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2010-04-16 7:46]

Hi Daniele,
What a stunning macro, very original, presented in such a fancy frame matched with the colors of the flower.
Very nice blossom of, perhaps, a fruit tree!
Lovely vivid colors and absolute sharpness.
A neat presentation and congratulations on your first experience in macro photography with your new lens. I assure you that your experiment is 100% successful.
My best regards,

Francis Xavier

Hello Daniele,

Excellent result. I am not sure about the frame though. A black frame would increase the impact of the colour.


Regards,
Siddhartha

Hi Daniele,
Beautiful colors. A good framing and a beautiful presentation.
Adnan.

Bomtarde danielle
Excellent focus. I believe you will try again. Congratulations.
Um abraço
teresa

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  • Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 639 W: 205 N: 43] (1347)
  • [2010-04-16 12:59]

Bonjour Daniele,
Pour un début, c'est un bon début ! La netteté est excellente et le fond neutre est très bien choisi. Pour le cadre, j'aime moins, mais ça, c'est une affaire de goût !! ;-)
Amicalement
Jean

Bonjour Danièle.

Tu sembles avoir fait un très bon investissement. Les détails, la netteté et les couleurs sont excellents.

Continues à pratiquer, tu sembles sur la bonne voie.

Amoureusement

Serge

Olá Daniele

Linda...linda esta fotografia.
As cores estão maravilhosas e
a composição muito bonita e
delicada. Delicada e suave está
a moldura também...de muito bom
gosto com as cores das flores.
Parabéns pelo interessante trabalho.
GA
Vera

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2010-04-16 16:31]

Hello Daniele,
I'm not sure about the choice of frame,it overpowers your image IMHO,perhaps just the drop shadow would have been sufficient,but frames are a personal choice & the interest or critique should be on your new lenses performance, re Macro.I like the quality it captures,very crisp ,clear,sharp details & no OE on the whites of the stamen,I think you will be very happy with this lens & this is your first image with it,well taken.May I ask if the background was a grey sky? or, seems a little void of colour.
TFS
Regards

Ron

Hello Daniele,
Nice beginning with new equipment. Clear image, brillant colors and sharp details
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi!

Its really cool image Dan!

wondereful shot!

teddy

Hola Daniele
Buen primer macro un encuadre muy acertado ,buena nitidez color y luz , todo un acierto para ser el primero espero ver los demas , gracias por compartir esta maravilla

Buen trabajo
Buen fin de semana
Carlos

Hi Daniele,
Beautiful colors and sharp macro. The frame I'm not happy, even the branch location.
Good luck with the new lens.
Excellent macro work.
Have a good weekend.
Sandor

Hi Daniele,
This is wonderful combination of body and lens,your shot is wonderful with amazing delicate flower branch against so impressive BG which soft gray while your the lovely blossoms looks stunning,the lighting and focus is well captured with lovely composition,a wonderful macro shot my friend,this lens is one s......lens!!
TFS
Best Regards
mushtaq

Félicitations Danièle pour cette première expérience et non la dernière. Très réussi , netteté sublime et sujet bien défini.
Bravo encore
Luc

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