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Hami new portrait

Hami new portrait
Photo Information
Copyright: Hameem Sarwar (hama) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 182 W: 0 N: 74] (1454)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-31
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony SLR A 900, Sony 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Zoom
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-10-09 4:37
Viewed: 1541
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This shot of Hami was taken some months ago.The time of tthe shot was an hour before the sun set.
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Hi, nice portrait pretty daughter.goodluck for you and her.tfs

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  • Shahs Silver Star Critiquer [C: 42 W: 0 N: 4] (384)
  • [2009-10-10 6:00]

very very good picture and pose.

Noor Ahamad Shah

Hello Hameem,

Hami is a beautiful young girl and this portrait is very good.
I did a WS and hope you don't mind!

(*) I haven't more smiles today

ASAK, Sarwar.
. The portrait of this pretty girl is expressive and soft and shows the innocence of the child. I did a workshop to change the background by darkening it. I still like the original. I hope you like it. I didn't do any sharpening or made any changes. Cheers and have a nice day.

Good portrait. Well chosen background, good placement of subject, good connection and good use of light.

Could be a little sharper, and you could crop it slightly to remove the partial bit of her arm at the very bottom of the frame.


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