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My little girl and me


My little girl and me
Photo Information
Copyright: Pedro Oliveira (mr_pedro) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 200 N: 372] (4662)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-05
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D300, Nikkor 28-105mm D, Compact Flash Card
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/160 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-09-05 13:30
Viewed: 1847
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just a picture from our family album that I would like to share here.

Pedro
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Surely a nice and technically fine addition to your family album.
The partly hidden face with two beautiful eyes...

Excellent composition
Very creative and nice sharpness
Great look from your little girl

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  • Usaf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 319 W: 87 N: 312] (2160)
  • [2009-09-05 17:47]

Hello Pedro

this one is very cute and superb composition, creative Idea. the baby she is so sweet with beautiful eyes.

TFS
Usaf

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
  • [2009-09-05 18:44]

this is an unbelievably good photo and i love the angle from which its shot, very unique :)

i get a very good feeling from this photo :)

muhammad muhsin

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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 265 W: 25 N: 207] (2856)
  • [2009-09-06 1:18]

excellent composition... it shows the love of a father.... well done... and the sharpness and details is great too....TFS

Hello Pedro,

I find this pov quite delightful.
The attention is on the baby whose beautiful, big, blue eyes are captivating the viewer.

I just feel that a crop to put the baby in a stronger position and closer to the screen would be even better.
I will do a w/s to show you what I mean.

Have a good day,
Bev :-)

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  • Margy Gold Star Critiquer [C: 103 W: 6 N: 221] (2520)
  • [2009-09-06 2:16]

Hello Pedro,

A very beautiful portrait, very special photo. The bright eyes of your daugter are adorable.
I agree with Bev about the crop, I would prefer that too.
But howerver, its a very beautiful one! tfs,
Regards, Marga

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2505 W: 368 N: 2626] (11966)
  • [2009-09-15 10:33]

Sommige mensen willen gewoon alles wegcroppen... maar ik vind dit een goeie compo, Pedro. Deze high key benadering van een "babyportret" is best wel mooi ook. Wat een blauwe kijkers!
TFS

Machtig en prachtig !
Heb ook de WS bekeken : dat is " een andere foto "
Vind jouw foto " beter " doordat je schouders over het beeld staan.
" dragende schouders " procentueel méér uitgesproken
in contrast met het hoofdje van je dochter

Pfff ... opnieuw ...
deze is " veiligheid "
WS is, IMO, meer " intimiteit "

Witbalans vind ik weer om van te snoepen :-)

Groetjes
Jan

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