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Friends


Friends
Photo Information
Copyright: DARREN MORAN (DARR) (25)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-01
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-01 20:20
Viewed: 1826
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Met these two young fellows while walking around Varanasi in India
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Hello Darren

Nothing like good friends. Great candid image of these friends. Nice work

Regards
Jimmy

Hi Darren,
Looks like you made a couple of friends,they seem at ease while you took their image. I really like their expressions esp' of the smaller boy to the right, he looks a little shy.
I would have cloned out the piece of paper to the right I find it a little distracting,my eye keeps moving from them to it. I think also a little less saturation & a tighter crop may
give this image a tad stronger composition,have done aWS to show what I mean,let me know what you think please.
TFS
Ron

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