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Fresh
Photo Information
Copyright: Mustafa Shairani (mshairani) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 42] (184)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-03
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D 90, Nikkor 18-200 f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AFS DX VR, 46 mm UV Filter
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-22 15:50
Viewed: 1611
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Trying to capture the vibe of freshness and liveliness these flowers were giving out on a nice summer day
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Hi Mustafa,
Very clean capture, it looks quite 'busy' due to the other flowers but the clarity on the center flower looks great. Quite a variation of yellow/green hues throughout, nice work with the shallow DOF.

TFS,
Scott.

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 571 W: 132 N: 805] (3839)
  • [2009-07-23 21:11]
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Hello bro
This one is good :)
Nice focus and good exposure control

I agree with Scott about "busy" i'd like to add that there are number of photos like this on many sites but what u need to do something different, something to make ur photo standout.

Suppose if u've taken this one below this flower using the sky as ur natural B.G??? :)

Just an idea ;)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6102 W: 174 N: 1935] (7534)
  • [2010-05-29 16:07]

Ciao Mustafa,


It is a fine sense of depth in this attractive composition!
Good lines and fine details, the field of freshness white
flowers stands out well as foreground...
Sharpness and clarity are absolutely nice for look at.
Nice composition and good presentation, TFS.

Have a nice weekend,

Sergio

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