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I'll stay
Photo Information
Copyright: Marina Notrima (marinka) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 100 W: 0 N: 65] (1103)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-18
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 400D, Canon 50 F 1.4
Exposure: f/2.2, 1/1600 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-24 13:01
Viewed: 1520
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A friend from Latvia came over to have a photoshoot.
Shot through glass.
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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2009-05-24 13:04]

Hello Marina,

Interesting shot with a beautiful lady!
I like the soft colors and textures!
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

:) Sorry but I have no more points

Interesting effect. I think the shadow on the glass - which reveals more of your model than where there is light reflection - is in the wrong location for this shot to work well.

If the shadow was over the part of the window in front of her eyes, we would see them more clearly and the effect would be better.

Just my view on the matter.

Rew

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
  • [2009-05-25 11:49]

hello marinka :)

i think this is the best and most 'off-beat' portrait i have seen here on TL in a long time :)

its so different and so creative :) i love everything :) and the glass effect is priceless :)

i am adding it as favorite :) and i must tell you i love your photos :)

its sad to see that this photo has not been well-recieved here on TL :(

muhammad muhsin

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