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Umar - Rock On Series - II

Umar - Rock On Series - II
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Copyright: Muhammad Muhsin (mark25) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-03-12
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Experimental, Nocturnal, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D3
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Elfik favorites [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-03-18 6:47
Viewed: 1279
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is another one from the locker room :)

this is the original composition :) i asked umar to gaze at the camera, but perhaps the gaze is a bit too strong here, and i suspect it might turn out to be this photo's weakness :)

again, ISO6400, Noise Reduction OFF, 1/100s and f/5 :)

applied an Ilford Delta film filter to it, to enhance the contrasts and thats it :)

hope you like it :) let's see what u think of this one :)

muhammad muhsin

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To adilakbar: thank u sir :)mark25 1 03-18 21:42
To teamill: hi!mark25 1 03-18 21:35
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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2110 W: 41 N: 0] (15189)
  • [2009-03-18 6:52]

Hi my friend...
Beautiful [email protected] portrait with nice tones...

Another great portrait of Umar .. his expression is very brooding though, kind of intimidating. He's a very handsome man, but if you could've captured a softer warmer expression somehow .. and I don't know how you could have done that .. still, a really nice B&W Muhammad.

Salam Muhammad,
He looks angry young man. Good composition. Nice B/W portrait. TFS - Regards - Adil.

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  • Elfik Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 73 W: 9 N: 40] (2461)
  • [2009-04-16 15:00]

i think the gaze is not too strong...I'm impressed. eyes are very strong point of this portrait and it's wonderful point.. in my opinion - it's really good portrait.And it looks very natural.

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