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My Ball


My Ball
Photo Information
Copyright: Lukas Winiarski (WIN) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 133 W: 12 N: 64] (1510)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-12
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Sony DSC-P200
Exposure: f/5.6
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Basketball, Streetball, Baskets and Playgrounds [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-06-14 10:07
Viewed: 2454
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my Ball.
She's still one of my best friend:)
Levels,contrast and frames by PS.
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  • Great 
  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 62 N: 749] (5437)
  • [2005-06-14 13:09]

Very good composition and excellent overall shot.

Andre'

  • Great 
  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 61 N: 169] (29336)
  • [2005-06-14 16:17]
  • [+]

A good idea Lukas, sincerely I like you shot but I would avoid the white line in full center. It would be interesting to do again with the white line in diagonal. The details of the asphalt in very interesting. Do it again please Lukas, with the same lightning, I'm sure it'll be a success.

  • Great 
  • goc Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-06-15 5:05]

excellent shot !!!
but ... :-) please try it once more but capture the line in diagonal and the shadow of the ball should captured in full if you know what i mean ... and then show us the masterpiece :-)
okay ?

keep up

goran

a ball, a line....ery simple but great effect....and hidden significance....the ball is before or after the line? good composition and colours

excellent photo Lukas
The ball on the dark ground with a white line
next to it give the image a great look, the framing is perfect too.
Great job

The most simple things, are the most beautiful ones! Great shot!

Cheers,
Carla

A very nice and simple image, with excellent lighting,nicely composed and great POV.
Bravo!
Vassilis

jedna z lepszych fotek jakie ostatnio widzialem , dla mnie rewelacja !!! brawo

pozdrawiam

I like the idea of taking a photo of the ball, especially with daylight that creates long shadows. My only suggestion would be to try and place the white line off centre, or even perhaps diagonally. Also maybe try if you can to get the whole shadow of the ball in the composition. I like the concept and the focus and sharpness are very good.
Sorry for no points, but I ran out today.

I just saw this from the theme...Very nice composition. Good use of light and colours to give a very graphical effect. TFS...I was planning on a basketball shot ..but never happened, maybe I will make one and add to your theme :)

I like this shot a lot. Nice compo and colors and simplicity. Iso may be right concerning the white line but I would have to see a few versions to tell which one is the best. This is good enough for me to leave my two points. :)

Very good graphic simple shot , bravo.

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 2 N: 153] (4208)
  • [2008-01-04 1:14]

nice capture good composition

Simply wonderful
Very clever composition, I like it so much

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