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Train tracks
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Copyright: Karen Arnold (dareco) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1672 W: 16 N: 832] (15528)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-11-11
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-11-19 12:31
Viewed: 1013
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Working with sepia and trying to improve, so all suggestions are welcome. Thank you.
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Hello Karen,

Perfect choice of sepia to this kind of photograph! Excellent perspective!
I think you can reduce some noise, increase the luminosity and sharpen more (a bit).
Tomorrow I will try a WS.
Congratulations for your experiment!
TFS,
Sergio

Hi Karen,
Very beautiful low point of view and excellent sepia tones and perspective.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

Merhaba
Good composition. Very nice work.

Kerem

How very western and rustic! Cool post Karen! My sepias usually aren't this saturation, but it has it's place. Sometimes I like that "golden" light look! Love the low profile here, hope you were watching for a train! LOL! Nice work! Nice balance of the tree on the left and the trees on the right!
B-)
Linda

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  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 594 W: 17 N: 1223] (4936)
  • [2008-11-19 13:15]

Hi Karen,
I like this shot. I like the low POV and perspective. The sepia was a great choice for the color. Very nicely done.
Regards,
Kevin

Helo Karen
Good choise for B&W and nice rail road .
Nice work and good idea
TFS
Cheers,Braca

Hi Karen
Very good angle,beautiful color,good perspective.Thanks.
Best regards,
Ralf

ciao Karen..
nice and effective pov!.. sepia is really effective! auburn colour is perfect to exalt the rail line!! moodly indeed! many thanks
ciao Marco

This works I think. I'm not a fan of sepia so I would never choose to do a shot like this, but your treatment here does have the feeling of an old photograph, suitably grainy in the sky and indistinct in its sharpness.
Nice job!
Rew

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2008-11-20 7:23]

Hello Karen
ERxcelent POV and composition of these railway to the infinit folloied by a fedradee of trees.
Great depht and sharpnes, and a wonderful sepia work. Great mood.
Congrats, mb

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 40 N: 3488] (13942)
  • [2008-11-20 16:25]

Hi Karen
The vertical lines of the tracks give a great dof.
Great texture and the sepia is great.
Dot

Hi Karen...nice sepia tone...the low contrast makes the shot look authentic and old....

Roger

something different from you but still lovely to look at.. beautiful sepia and capture.. good composition as well.. tfs..

regards, terry

Hi Karen.....
this is a good capture.....
Love the low POV and the great composition! WELL DONE!!!

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