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Form (Marlene)
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Copyright: Carey Nash (Carey) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 12 W: 4 N: 27] (777)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Experimental
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-25 23:59
Viewed: 2399
Points: 23
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
marlene is a fitness trainer...we were trying for a new business card....it has it's flaws, but I like it.
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Flaws! Where? It's beautiful. The light, the richness of colour is fantastic. Forget business, think poster!

To be very critical and I mean nit picky you may wish to rotate the canvas clockwise around 0.3 - 0.5 degrees. Super job, really , super


Just super & love the idea of the silhoute with the light in the background. Congratulations..

Ciao Rosana

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  • sarju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 0 N: 68] (492)
  • [2005-04-26 0:57]

Very impressive shot Carey
I like the dark tones of the photo ... I would say that sun is a bit too bright i some parts of the photo though

  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2005-04-26 2:19]

Good silhouette and nice tone in the shot. TFS. Tim

She has one hand longer than other...but good idea and beautifull play of son on her hair.

great use of silhouette Carey! especially against that wonderful rich blue background.. and the sun is positioned beautifully giving that radiating feeling from her face and shoulders.. really like the mood of this :-)


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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2005-04-26 7:34]

Carey, great shot you have here. I am not sure if it is good for a business card but good enough for promotional poster? yeah, some minor flaws but easy to fix. Fingers are a bit funny... tummy...front of neck. These are super minor and with a bit of work they are fixed. However the whole photo is superb and effect with the colour is superb.


Nice shot i like the colors and the nice silhouette .great light in de back ground.

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  • Maru Gold Star Critiquer [C: 471 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-04-26 14:34]

Hi Carey,
amazing shot with that high contrast and harsh light in the background. Love the blue tone in your composition and the pose of the woman.
Well done.

It was not work? Did you try just the black silouhette. No background... On a white car it could be workless... Curiously.. i see some determination, some insurrance! Great photo!

Magnifique, bravo!

Excellent job for any card or poster! Love the way you composed the picture and used the backlight. Super! This one calls for favorites :)
Excellent job done, regards!

beautiful, nice silhouette.

and the color is wonderful

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