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my angel


my angel
Photo Information
Copyright: jatmika jati (msjeje) (422)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-21
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: canon 350d, Tamron 28-105mm f4-5.6
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-20 2:26
Viewed: 1843
Points: 8
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To Ananfoto: terima kasihmsjeje 1 02-20 19:41
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Asalamualaikum Jati,
Foto portrait nih bagus banget dengan photo editingnya sekali...abang senang dengan hasil kerja adek nih..Siapa nih dek..cantik banget..:)titip salam ya untuk abang..Oya abang ada sedikit kritik disini..jangan marah ya...

1/Abang masih nampak outline cut pada sebahagian portrait nih..
2/Skin tones color pada portrait tak begitu lumayan...terlalu pucat..
3/Bahagian mata kalau boleh diterangkan dan shadow dibahagian itu juga di kurangkan supaya lebih nampak expression nya.

Other thing very well done..nicely touch..
Well done dek..

Salam,
Anan

superb portrait. excellent lighting and mood
indrajit

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 796 W: 48 N: 1708] (11179)
  • [2008-02-20 11:05]

ciao jatmina...amo le fate e la cultura che le ha create...un ottima composizione...bellissimo lavoro..ottimo pov e bellissimi i dettagli...complimenti..
lele

Muy buena textura y pinceles y muy bonita.
Sara.

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