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kNiTteD
Photo Information
Copyright: Aline Pealane (pealane) (74)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-28
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/11, 1/125 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-01-01 1:29
Viewed: 3149
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I like how d strands of her hair covers a bit of her face. This is an indoor shoot. Studio courtesy of an accommodating co-hobbyist.
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  • Great 
  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2008-01-01 3:39]

Wau Aline ,exremely romantic and erotic,what a start of the new year!
jan

  • Good 
  • riems Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 22 N: 51] (1795)
  • [2008-01-01 7:56]
  • [+]

interesting shot, Aline....... except - don't mind me saying so - the girl's nose is a little bit too much emphasised due to the pose.....
Happy new year!!
Peter

I like it! This is good work. The light is nice, the sharpness is excellent and the pose works very well indeed. The placement of hands is reinforced by the line of her jersey's collar, creating a strong diagonal in the frame to emphasise her eyes.

Did you do any PP on this? It looks as though the contrast might be a little too high, but overall it's a fine shot.

Rew

u hav a beautiful model aline.
imo it will be more eye catching if you did some post process like curves and little highlights..

see my workshop...

  • Good 
  • japat Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 10] (1309)
  • [2008-01-07 22:23]

di ko makita yung ganda ng modelo dito...parang may kulang...at parang may sumobra...pero yung kulay tama..tingin ko late ka ng capture..madalas kasi studio ang ilaw kadalasan ready na ..ready mo lng timpla ng camera ok na..kailangan n lng ay tyempo at ang partisipasyon ng modelo.sangayon ako sa sinabi rin ni seerpix....
ipagpatuloy at magtyaga at mas bilisan ang mata...
mabuhay ka..

japs

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