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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 451 W: 139 N: 813] (5358)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08
Categories: Friends/Family, Experimental, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Fuji Finepix S7000
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-22 12:47
Viewed: 3153
Points: 31
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She is still dreaming... and I love it!!
This is my daugther Vivianne. We were making a tour on our bicycle and it was getting dark. It was hard to make a sharp photo, so I focus on the eyes.

I wanted to try the program Dreaming suite, Marcel showed us a photo using this programm.

So it's an experiment for me. I wanted to try this out. Let me know what you think of it!

For using this program and for the software check the AutoFX site or the photo of Marcel!!

Thanks for reading this whole story and I hope you can use the information!


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To Hendrika: Filters...Jan 2 11-28 00:41
To kbeall: Thanks!!!Jan 1 11-27 06:40
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Hi Jan,
Great soft focus portrait! A bit like the David Hamilton style (hope this will not upset you). She's not looking into the lens which makes it a bit mystic. erfect image, very attractive.

I have often used this filter Janneke, I love it!
Not just the filter, but also this image.
The light is gorgeous and it's a very nice composition...
And... it's a very pretty girl!


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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1483 W: 0 N: 1852] (14495)
  • [2007-11-22 13:16]

Hier kan je trots op zijn Jan,zowel op je model alsook je werk!

Prachtige opname. Werk om trots op te zijn. Op je dochter zal je dat al zijn.
Gr Frans

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  • Ruut Gold Star Critiquer [C: 254 W: 8 N: 33] (1277)
  • [2007-11-22 14:05]

Hallo Janneke,
Goed geslaagd portret door mooie compositie en vage achtergrond. Het focussen op de ogen is goed gelukt. Het 'dromerige' heb je wat mij betreft goed weten te vangen.

Hello Jan,

Very nice portrait. Excellent light. I must say your daughter is a very attractive model. :)

Hi Janneke

Nice potrait with soft touch....great potrait

Amri HMS

I like the eyes, it tell a story

Hallo Janneke,
Eenvoudig, maar teder portret. Goed qua belichting en kleurcontrast. Mooie pose met - inderdaad - een dromerige blik in de ogen. De ietwat "zachte focus" werkt goed hier en versterkt het dromerige gevoel. Knap gedaan!
TFS & groeten,

Bonjour Janneke
Tes portraits sont toujours très réussis, celui ci particulièrement grace peut être au regard


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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer [C: 124 W: 54 N: 132] (1248)
  • [2007-11-25 12:09]

Heel mooi Jan,
Heb het programma ook maar gelijk gedownload.
De zus van Sabin heeft waarschijnlijk nog een fotoprogramma voor mij want ik zit dit moment weer zonder. Balen!!!


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  • moody Gold Star Critiquer [C: 115 W: 1 N: 1] (51)
  • [2007-11-26 9:35]

superb photo and very nice expressions.
good controls.
cheers, moody

Hi Janneke,
An excellent portrait of your beautiful daughter, and your post processing is perfect.
I also like how you either snapped or cropped so that a vertical bisector of the frame passes through one of the eyes, as many of the masters would paint. Was that intuitive or deliberate?
Again, a great job,

Heel prettig portret van je mooie dochter Janneke. Die klep voor haar voorhoofd en haar blik die van je af is gericht geven net dat beetje extra - fijn he die filters?!
TFS foto en info,

Hi Janneke!
Very well portrait!
I like lighting and atmosphere!
Best Regards!

Very lovely model!
Nice portrait! :)


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