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Unforgiven II

Unforgiven II
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Copyright: Muhammad Muhsin (mark25) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-20
Categories: Experimental, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D200, Nikkor 18-200mm AF-S, VR
Exposure: f/11, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Rhymea's favourite [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-04-23 7:57
Viewed: 1765
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
another one from the unforgiven series... this one has better light on my face i guess...

instead of the nikon sb800 flash light, we used studio soft boxes for this one... and they did a good job in my opinion...

i know my pose is a bit too typical, but then again, it was too hot and i was forced to wear my friend kohi's jacket (treklens: wanderer).. i was so uncomfortable in that...

i liked the hat a lot, i should have hit kohi with a rubber hose, put him in a plastic bag and walked away with the hat.. too bad that didn't happen..heheheh...

lets see what u think of this one... let's also see if the beard is complimenting the indiana jones thing or not..

muhammad muhsin

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The colors here are much better.... and I can see, besides the eyes, a kind of smile. Not frighten anymore. Very good photo.

Very Indiana Jones indeed! I can imagine it would be very hot!
I already liked the first version of this with its more 'mysterious' mood but this one certainly has better clarity of your face, and direct eye contact - but perhaps your expression here is too mild to be a focused and determined archaeologist!
Good sharpness and detail, TFS

Hi Muhammad,

Well first off I think the lighting certainly did do the trick, and although I 'sort of' prefer the previous version, this one has it's own and singular mood to it, which essentially is good! Wonderful focusing done here, and in general the whole ensemble (beard an all!) really makes an impact on the shot... a mix of Clint and Jones. I like the deep colour tones in the image, and the way you're looking over your shoulder... very neat pose, not too typical!

Well done, and this song... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QUua6EB_N8M keeps popping up in my head when I see it. I suppose it's because you're looking over your shoulder. Anyways, 'nough said.


Excellent lighting on this one too, Muhammad. Slightly different effect and mood created, but it looks great. The colours are much more enhanced and detail is much more pronounced.
Well done.
Regards, Kath

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