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Copyright: Lukasz Talaga (HIMself) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 314 W: 5 N: 9] (3605)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-08
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Architecture, Artwork, Event, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Sigma SD9, SIGMA 18-50 f:3.5-5.6 DC
Exposure: f/8, 1/30 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-04-09 15:53
Viewed: 2536
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
regards for all
taki maly ekspryment
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  • Great 
  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2572 W: 237 N: 6132] (24044)
  • [2007-04-09 15:59]

An excellent composition. I really like the way her hair blows in the wind -- just like the wheat behind her.
Delightful colours and details

Podoba Mi sie zdjecie i dziewczyna.Bardzo przyjemna kompozycja.
Pozdrawiam R.

Hi Lukasz:
Nice shot, Almost everything about Eva seems coordinated with her surroundings: her hair blowing like the wheat, the colors of her hair & jacket, it all goes with the background very well. She even seems just a little cold & sad, or maybe meloncholy, like the days & the surrounding land seem. The only thing that seemed incongruant was the metal stud in her lip; I thought it stood out & detracted from the shot. I'll never understand why a beautiful woman would willingly mar her beauty by shoving metal through her face, but then I'm hardly an authority on fashion & have no right to tell people what to do with their own lives. Sorry, I digress. Overall I liked the shot & thought it had good composition & was well done. Best regards to you & to Ewa, Erik. :)

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  • niebo (100)
  • [2007-04-10 7:27]

hehe, super niebo i świetny kontrast między pierwszym planem- Ewą, a planem 2

Fajny eksperyment, Lukasz.
Super colours in the BG and good contrast with the model.
*** Ursula ***

I like this image and I like the way her hair blows with the wind. I feel that maybe a lot is happening in the background with colours and thought she might look better close up with a bland black and white background. I have done a workshop and I hope I have not spoilt your orininal idea.

regards helen

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