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Miss Teen Montana

Miss Teen Montana
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Copyright: Giap Thai (cafe) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 25] (1237)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Event
Camera: canon 350d, 70 - 200 f/4L
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-18 11:38
Viewed: 1566
Points: 6
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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1264 W: 44 N: 3160] (18766)
  • [2007-03-18 12:17]
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Girls look much older.... miss??????????? not so very beautiful - sorry but I see them like nothing special........ just girls like millions if others, picture it self is good with nice light expo. TFS Tomasz

merhaba dear giap
very good lovely models.good light and colours.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Frankly I do not care about whether the subjects fit a certain standard of beauty or not, or whether they are the most beautiful female subjects on TL. The point here is: is this good PHOTOGRAPHY? What techniques are we employing here? I like the rich colors, the exposure is very good for that direct, bright sunlighting (which can be difficult to work with). I love the shallow depth of field, which makes these two women really pop out. Perfect how they are looking straight at the camera and smiling big. It looks very natural, surprisingly. However, I think that you could have left a little more room on the sides, especially the right side, to show off that shallow DOF more and to create balance. Try next time leaving more room above their heads since their vertically-positioned figures create an upward motion that leads the eye to the top of the photo, and there needs to be room at the top for the eye to rest. Also, the balloons at the bottom are distracting and compete too much with the women's faces. Really beautiful clarity and very sharp. It's a bright and happy photo, and a nice shot of these two women. TFS!

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