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Copyright: Patrick Weiss (patrickweiss) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 97 W: 4 N: 4] (267)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-27
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Macro
Camera: Fujifilm Finepix F30
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/318 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-01-11 15:45
Viewed: 2069
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a writing in front of a bank out of metal.

No PP!


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  • sebak Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 131 W: 12 N: 25] (433)
  • [2007-01-20 11:00]

Hi Patrick,
a very nice makro picture with a great Tiefenunschärfe ;-)!
Well done


Hello Patrick,
I like this kind of close-up!
Narrow DOF does the trick here, in creating a borderline abstract photograph...
Well framed and good point of view!
Pablo -

Neat pov & good comp. Well seen.

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 549 W: 64 N: 24] (5600)
  • [2007-01-24 13:08]

Nice shot.
Very interesting angle.
Great idea

Hi, Patrick. My eye is really drawn to the constrasting textures of the stone and metal, seen through throughout the narrow depth of field and beyond. A very pleasing photo for that reason. Composition and colors are very good as well. The flat light of that day served you well in creating this kind of photo. Best, Hugh

Hi Patrick,
Nice shot! well composed, I love the details. Very graphic.

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  • krzesz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 662 W: 5 N: 15] (5459)
  • [2007-02-09 13:22]

Hello Patric!!!hmmm..Interesting perspective and good sharpness!!
I am waiting for next your works!!!!!
Thanks for your commentary!!!

hey patrick:
Its a nice focus and nice idea,why dont u use your ideas to take more photos!I have two german friend with good ideas:p
C u soon with new shots!

Hi Patrick,
Excellent POV on this photo and great choice of the shallow DOF to create a sense of distance. Superb details in both the stone and the metal. Great work. Cheers, Todd

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