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Lyse Veil
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Copyright: Myriam LACOSTE (alcaline) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 292 W: 0 N: 69] (979)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-21
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-28 8:23
Viewed: 1445
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She dreamed that a long pink dress was sliding down on her, slowly... that silk touched her long legs slightly, that laces entangled her thin neck, and that pearls were enlighting her soft carnation...

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Sensual note makes the image sensual as well. :) Very good composition (photo and note). Thanks for sharing!

Regards,

Pierre

Lovely closeup. Great comp & colors. Wonderful form in the flower.

BonjourMyriam,
Bravo pour le cadrage, très original et réussi.
Il est en effet peu commun et cette symétrie en fait une image très esthétique.
Le seul petit défaut que je lui trouve est en bas à gauche, j'aurais poussé le raisonnement de ton cadrage entièrement en évitant la zone claire d'arrière-plan.
Mais ce n'est qu'un détail, les points positifs l'emportent largement ! ;)
Stéphane

Nice close-up , like colors , I should prefer small frame .
TFS

bonjour myriam
wonderful macro picture.wonderful flower and lovely colours.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 62 N: 749] (5437)
  • [2006-11-28 18:51]

The fragile beauty of this flower is made even lovelier by your word. You are a real artist!

Andre'

Beautiful image . Nice composition.

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 365 W: 110 N: 268] (3865)
  • [2006-11-30 17:14]

Bonjour Myriam,
Une belle macro qui a 3 belles qualités : le détail sur les pétales, le vert translucide qui équilibre les couleurs et l'ombrage du pistil sur un pétale. Belle composition. Le cadre est lourd et écrase un peu la luminosité de la fleur. L'ajout d'un contour blanc ou un amincissement du cadre aurait je crois allégé le tout. Très joli malgré tout ! Bonne soirée.
Ivan

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  • sleger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 476 W: 55 N: 177] (3549)
  • [2006-11-30 17:58]

Beau cadrage et bien présenté. Plaisant à la vue.

Sylvain

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  • lion Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 549 W: 64 N: 24] (5600)
  • [2006-12-01 9:40]

Lovley photo.
Nice idea and crop.
Good macro, contrast and frame

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  • rater Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 196 W: 52 N: 111] (957)
  • [2006-12-01 11:23]
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Nice texture in the petals... the only detail I see is in the bottom left corner, a pity that you see the background... mais en tout cas un belle photo!

VERY beautiful! The frame makes the lovely sharp colors stand out just perfect.
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

I like the symmetry of this one. Nice color too. Not too loud and to tame. Just right. I like the framing too.

TFS.

Hi Myriam
Good macro great frame
Very well done TFS

FaTiH

Hi Myriam, good composition, focus and pov. saturation very good. But like the note. Nice one, tfs.
Hannes

Hi Myriam ,
nice shot with good sharp and beautiful colors.
thanks
Saeed

Hi Myriam,

WOW!! Impressive close up!! Great details and colours!! I also like the contrast and lighting!

Very very well done
Constantinos

Myriam, poco que añadir a los comentarios de mis colegas, me uno a este grupo de fans, esta imagen lo vale y mucho.

beautiful color...i really like the thick black frame with this one...too bad you can see some of the background in the lower left corner...great macro...peace***

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  • atenna (27)
  • [2006-12-21 17:18]

beautiful flower and beautiful note... the black frame is perfect!

Hi Myriam, great macro. Wonderful flower. The lightening is very good.

Happy New Year 2007

Lenka

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  • Fortuna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 3811 W: 2520 N: 16] (72)
  • [2010-03-14 15:52]

Hi Myriam,

Lovely macro, nice colors, great crop.
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

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