Very good portrait shot. The lighting is superb. I also like how you developed it. The tones are even. Composition wise, I think it may be better if the eyes are more visible. But that is just an opinion. I love this picture. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Treklens!
- Dialogue (0)
- [2006-10-11 12:34]
Well done photo with careful lighting. Thanks for sharing and welcome to TrekLens!
- jcnunes (137)
- [2006-10-11 12:45]
Nice way to start!! I miss a note though.
I agree with previous opinion... Photo would be nicer if you should a liitle more or less the face. The amount you chose is a bit disturbing for me.
- Suerte (3032)
- [2006-10-11 12:58]
Welcome to TL!great BW work!wonderful pose, great mood!well done!
- degetica (2802)
- [2006-10-11 13:04]
hello Sandi, welcome to TL!!
Great lightining here, and i like this composition.
The tones are also beautiful, did you use alittle editing software for the,?
Anyway, nice to see a photo taken on film!!!
- cjjc_jules (3746)
- [2006-10-11 14:12]
welcome to tl this is very strong entry, we hope to see more great photo from you. enjoy your stay-jon
- mikeguevy (794)
- [2006-10-11 15:07]
reminds me of a janet jackson cover album. very dramatic in black and white. good choice and good job.
- wlodas (208)
- [2006-10-11 15:13]
OK, so what's this? No note, just questions: is it you or your model? If this is you, is this self-portret or someone did this picture? Does she always wait naked? (for me this is a mismatch: titlephoto)
Apart from that i liked it, but it could be bigger (~700 pixels in height). Nice shadows and good idea with source of light.
To sum up: a note is the key.
Welcome to TL!!
- rewshearer (24649)
- [2006-10-11 18:34]
Welcome to TrekLens!
Very bold and moody portrait. Very "arty" in its composition and lighting and pose.
Unfortunately her almost-exposed breast is very distracting, due to the strong light.
Overall, nice work
- Shogun (10434)
- [2006-10-12 8:13]
hi Sandi. Welcome to TL. Striking 1st pic. :)
very nice in Black and White. TFS.
An interesting monochrome composition has been posted. Well illumined and exposing subject. Ērisp details have been captured. Attractive pose a pretty model. But.....
Something is missing in this portrait, I wonder why?