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Before the departure...

Before the departure...
Photo Information
Copyright: Fa to (Nay) (34)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-07-23
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: Trois mois à Rome
Date Submitted: 2006-01-20 18:58
Viewed: 4277
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Le monde est tellement monotone.
On y rencontre plus personne.
Les gens sont cachés derrière des murs bétons,
Derrière des murs prisons.

Partir, partir en dirigeable,
Partir, n'importe où, mais partir,
Partir et ne plus revenir,
Partir, partir dans les étoiles,
Partir, n'importe où, mais partir,
Partir et ne plus revenir.

Le monde est tellement monotone.
Comme ils ont l'air triste, les hommes,
Mais moi, je m'en vais dans un autre univers
D'ombres imaginaires.

J'étouffe dans ce paysage,
Ciment, fer et béton sauvage.
Partons au-dessus des nuages.
Tu sais mon amour, c'est l'été.

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To erikro: hello!Nay 1 07-06 04:45
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Ciao Fanny!
I like the light, the contrast of the photo. We can feel something, watching this.

Nice shot. Black backround is realy nice. TFS.

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  • erikro (14)
  • [2007-04-27 3:06]
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I have always been a fan of face glitter and I think that the subtle application of glitter by the subject around her eyes makes for a very nice compliment to the natural shine on her face. Aside from the space needed to add the caption (because I don't speak the language, I don't know what it means), I would have cropped a little bit more off of the left side of the photo to really bring the focus more on the subject. I love the black and white usage and the non traditional expression (I really feel that the subtle glitter adds a nice touch) and commend you on a solid job

nice portrait good job! wonderful compo and POV!=)

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