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Copyright: Lewis Thompson (lewiz) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 1 N: 3] (78)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-09-02
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, AF-S Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3.5-4.5G ED DX
Exposure: f/3.5
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-20 18:49
Viewed: 2165
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A shot of a travel partner in China. I'm particularly fond of this photo but I can't put my finger on why... maybe it's just because it is of personal interest to me.

Thanks for any comments.
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I had one of these mazes when I was a kid - played it endlessly. And I just bought one for my son for Christmas. What I like in your photo is your subject's look of concentration and the overall composition. Plus you've handled the lighting very well for shooting in front of a window. Well done!

Nice variety of blacks, whites and grays, Lewis! Your tones are very pretty, and her expression is cute. :) I just wish her hair were against her head so that my eyes wouldn't keep going to the misbehaving braids in the back! Could you clone them out? Just a thought.

Nice control of everything, Lewis (except her hair!!!) :)))))


I like your friends hair. It says something about her personality. It's the concentrated look on her face that makes us feel so involved as quiet observors in her deep thought.

Hi Lewis, fantastic photograph, love the b/w, and the light. A great portrait of a beautiful girl, and you caught a great expression.


Well composed and an interesting game. Love the girl's expession of concentration. Great shot Lewis

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  • Eru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 210 W: 4 N: 87] (2831)
  • [2006-01-22 1:15]

Hello Lewis,

Good composition. The light is great, the B/W too and the look of this girl very cute.


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