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Copyright: Pedro Montes (periko) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 44 N: 32] (2229)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2015-06-19
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D7000, AF-S Nikkor 18-105 mm
Exposure: f/25.0, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-07-01 12:57
Viewed: 1227
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
After buying a bottle of water I asked permission this young seller to take a photo, and she said... of course!
Taken in the shade of a tree, in a warm and sunny day.
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To bobsmith: Smileperiko 1 07-03 22:33
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What a smile and beauty for ever and ever also a very lovely portrait all the best for the future of this lovely lady well done PEDRO MONTES

Ciao Pedro, great portrait of lovely girl with fantastic smile, fine details, splendid light and wonderful colors, very well done, my friend, ciao Silvio

Hi Pedro

I'm not an expert photographer, especially portrait photography. But I'll give my thoughts for what they are worth and you can ignore as you see fit.

Firstly, I think you could have taken the photo from a lower point of view, so you were level with her. I also think some fill flash or reflector could have been used to lighten her face a little. The background is distracting, so a wider aperture, giving a narrow depth of field could have been used. But you have captured a lovely expression, and I'm sure she was pleased with the result.

Hi Pegro,
A nice tight crop of the vendor and her partial working surroundings.Nice eye contact and well detailed facial features.

Hola Pedro! Nice girl, nice eyes, fine smile. Superb colours, superb lightness and brightness. Good portrait. Well done!

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