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Small triumphs


Small triumphs
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Copyright: Carmem A Busko (carmem_busko) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 431 W: 68 N: 225] (2623)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-08-01
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Olympus OM2000, Vivitar 28-210 f/3.5
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Travelogue: Atibaia
Theme(s): Best in Black & White, Babies & Children all Over The World [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-08-14 18:24
Viewed: 2954
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
A friend of mine has said: "The boy is crawling to get near, to listening to love music speech..."
The boy´s first steps.. the couple in love.. small conquests...Taken in a city of Atibaia park, on winter sunny morning.

I´ve uploaded a color version to compare as a workshop.

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I like it. The boy seems to be going for the adults in the background. Lots of crawling ahead. Good shot.

This little guy has a long way to go and looks like he is on his way. A really cute photo... I like it...

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  • Yod Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 102 W: 10 N: 73] (987)
  • [2004-08-14 22:43]

Excelente trabalho.Melhor ainda por ter escolhido B.W.Perfeita composição e uso da profundidade de campo (que aliás eu não consigo controlar com a compacta digital)Excelente variação de tons.Grande título.Yod

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 911 W: 122 N: 48] (246)
  • [2004-08-15 6:45]

This is a beautifull shot as well Carmen. Thre is a good emphasis on the child and your point of view makes on think of "taking steps in to the un known" as a child do every day...

Chosing B&W was defenatly a wise choise. In the colour version the colour themselfes conflicts with the motive. they become a distraction rather then emphasising it.

Good work Carmen

Really nice. There's a story that's captured here. Nicely composed. I think b/w is the right choice, the DOF is good too! One small criticism (due to the time of day probably) the hat and shirt on the boy are a bit overexposed, but this is a small thing.

Very moving photo and note. I bet he could out-crawl me any old day. :) I like the choice of B&W and the framing works well here.
~Stacey

Carmem, conferi a versão original em seu workshop. Gostei mais da versão P&B.

(O garoto sabia que estava sendo fotografado?)

Parabéns mais uma vez.

Lívio

Excelente, o enquadramento e o fundo desfocado ficaram ótimos! muito natural! e o b&w ficou ótimo!
abraços.
David.

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