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Emerging Two

Emerging Two
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Copyright: raimundo mesquita (mesquens1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2602 W: 147 N: 2136] (40829)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2018-12-04
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/8, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2018-12-05 20:57
Viewed: 472
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The title that comes to this photo is necessarily "Emerging Two" because here the day was born with blue ce and dense clouds, while in the first the Christ comes out of a very dark night.
I like the two pictures.

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To zto: Your WSmesquens1 2 12-07 00:28
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Hi Raimundo, I like the general idea of what you are trying to achieve and the composition kind of works with the statue of Christ positioned in a good place. The issues I see (in my humble opinion) with the end result are colour balance and contrast. The image has too much cyan and green colour for the clouds to really stand out. The statue almost blend in with the clouds in the lower right hand side of the image as the colours are very similar and there is not a lot of contrast. I will see if I can manage to upload a workshop for you. I use Lightroom and Photoshop CS. I would keep up with this idea and perhaps next time use a polarisation filter to bring out the structure of the clouds some more.

Bonjour Raimundo,

Les nuage cadrent bien la statue. La prise de vue permet de voir les détails de la statue qui est cachée en partie par les nuages. Les nuages donnent un aspect mystérieux à la scène. Bonne journée.


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