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Variations on red


Variations on red
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Copyright: raimundo mesquita (mesquens1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2629 W: 147 N: 2136] (40749)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2017-08-24
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS Rebel T5, Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/4 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2017-08-24 15:22
Viewed: 629
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One of the good things about the Treks is the critical comments.
These red florets of Begonia in the early versions received harsh criticism from my friends Erwiin Kruger and David Holliday.
They were also challenges that justify this repost.


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I think one of the problems Raimundo is that these flowers are not familiar. Everything else is focussed even the haw frost? on the edge of the flowers. I think therefore that the flowers are sharply focussed (I just don't know what they what they should like!) I think this is a better shot than your original. Nice job
regards
David

An ensemble of a secret garden.. a good subject for art students to learn how to paint, "the dimensions and proportions"! indeed excellent proportions which are not easy to perform in photography well done as always RAIMUNDO MESQUITA

Hello Raimundo,
Nice colors....very powerful.......Good idea.
Marius.

Hi Raimundo,
Good crop and overall sharpness has given a fine result. Neat diagonal created by the vivid red flowers.
erwiin...

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