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The subject.

The subject.
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Copyright: raimundo mesquita (mesquens1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2602 W: 147 N: 2136] (40829)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-05-18
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon EOS Rebel T2i, Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6, 58 mm Kenko Circular Polarizer
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2014-05-18 6:21
Viewed: 900
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This thing was on a white surface, and before it was a pack of garlic.
I decided to try and liked the result that I submit to the consideration of those who wish to criticize and suggest.
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It's hard to photograph subjects on white surface but you did very well in controlling the glare. Simple but effective composition. Good details. Well done, tfs.

a lovely capture,subtle light,clear and sharp focus,lovely bright color and a simple but ideal composition.Raimundo my old friend a classic contribution.tfs

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2014-05-18 8:25]

Well my friend I do not wish to criticise, but I would like to suggest. Just as another point of view, I wondered Raimundo, that if you were to have a part of a garlic clove protruding from the tear at the containers open end, if it would add more impact to your composition or not? Just a thought.I like the clarity of the texture & its design as well as the light & dark shades, TFS.
Best Regards

Hello Raimundo,
This catches one's eye even in thumbnail. Simple, unusual and very effective. Well done.

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  • lauro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 71 W: 5 N: 78] (874)
  • [2014-05-18 14:50]

Olá Raimundo,
Acho que captou bem um objecto banal do dia-a-dia.
Também acho curiosas estas mini-sacas e concordo que resultou bem e sua experiência.
Usou o polarizador para eliminar os reflexos da superfícia branca, pelo que vejo. Bem jogado!

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  • periko Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 44 N: 32] (2229)
  • [2014-05-18 17:49]

Interesting result, Raimundo. You've taken the opportunity to obtain a good and different shot.


Hello my friend, what a lovely capture of this sack against the background of white. The netting on the sack and the simple but elegant background in the placement gives a very balanced composition. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2014-05-18 20:20]


quelle compo et vue sueprbe quel tissus avec ce nœud merveilleuse image très bien vu.
bravo et amitié

salut raimundo,
c'est quoi garlic.
belle réussite technique..
ça fait marcher les méninges

Hi Raimundo,
Good camera work and a neat clean and clear result.

hi Raimundo, this is a nice departure from your usual shots and is effective due to its high contrast and simplicity Nice ob

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