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Copyright: Carmem A Busko (carmem_busko) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 431 W: 68 N: 225] (2623)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-06-11
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/7.3, 1/1000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Futbol, Terra Brasilis [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-06-14 2:19
Viewed: 2336
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Boy playing alone, in a folk party(the shadows are from little flags of the party).
Toned to bw with digital film tools plugin.
All critiques are welcome!!
(a lot of work has been keeping me away....)


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Carmem, looks like classical photography :-) you cought the ball between shadows of flags. Also horizontal lines with flags look very good.

There are three elements on your photo - leg, ball, and mysterious circle-shape. They are composed in strong points of the frame - lucky!

There is one thing I'm not fond of here - the frame - I would prefere such simple.

But overall - perfect!

Piotr

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  • SILVA Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (3917)
  • [2005-06-14 5:00]

Esta é mais uma grande foto sua Carmen.Grande crop,adoro o preto e branco..tudo aki funciona muito bem

A lovely shot. Full of childhood memories.
TFS!

i like the sense of sospension of the shot, like if the ball stopped just a few seconds before to restart her run, great! and the black and white give somthing poetic to the photo

Superb composition, Carmen! My eyes keep going from the foot, to the ball, to the shadow of the ball, then back to the foot. Fascinating!

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  • nofer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 793 W: 255 N: 452] (1583)
  • [2005-06-14 13:55]
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Bola no ar... e você deu uma "bola dentro"... uma excelente composição. Ufa.. você voltou...He... He...
Obrigado!
Reynaldo

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  • fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 741 W: 119 N: 910] (8190)
  • [2005-06-15 15:41]

Excelente!!!Tudo nesta composição ficou maravilhoso.
Adorei o preto e branco a foto parece estar em 3D.
Grande trabalho Carmen.
Parabéns
Fernando

Hi Carmem!
Muito criativo esse emquadramento. Uma bela mensagem sobre o nosso futebol.
Bola no pé e de chinelos! o b&w ficou excelente.
David

how great, I love it! what a "slice of life" the contrasts are wonderful; the vitality and sense of movement, excellent regards, ck

Olá, Carmem. Tenho andado sumido daqui, mas é sempre bom conferir sua galeria de fotos.

Bela composição acima. Um dia desses, pensei em tentar tirar algumas fotos de uns garotos jogando bola num parque aqui. Só pensei, mas ainda é algo que vou tentar.

Também gosto do uso de preto-e-branco. A impressão que tenho é a de que o preto-e-branco acaba conferindo à foto um quê de nostalgia ou saudade. Por fim, se eu não estiver enganado, a bola acima é do tipo das que, em minha infância, chamávamos de dente-de-leite.

Grande abraço.

Lívio

I am not too sure what to think of this one except that it is very South American. The overall composition is a bit confusing although that balland its shadow are nice. And the foot of course, giving the human touch. I think its the flags that shouldn't be there. But it is nicely seen and taken.

Very clever shot, brilliant timing, and a good arrangement for the compo.

Hola

Excelente composición Carmen. Me ecanta.
Saludos

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