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Copyright: Alejandro Segarra (alefidel) Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 0 N: 82] (1190)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-19
Categories: Nature, Architecture, Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D80, 18-70 Nikkor DX Zoom, Digital, Marumi C-PL
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-13 12:23
Viewed: 1899
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Lonely Patagonian Ranch in the middle of the patagonian valleys between the South Andes Mountains and the Atlantic Ocean.
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  • Nan (58)
  • [2008-11-13 12:29]

Hello Segarra,
Beautiful landscape.
Best regards

I'm sure it was a beatiful sight but in my opinion you tried to "pack" a bit too much into one photo. The eyes don't really know where to rest or what to concentrate on. Try choosing one or two details, that makes it less distracting and noisy.

Fantástica imagen con mucha profundidad y una composición ejemplar..saludos

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  • karl Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 66 N: 62] (986)
  • [2008-11-13 14:28]

te felicito, los paisajes de la patagonia son asi, tanta inmensidad y de repente todo junto en una casa y un corral. los colores son exactamente esos

I must agree with "soya de" here, Alejandro.
The landscape and the composition are OK, even impressive, but our eyes have too much to focus on.
Said this, I think this is partly due to the exaggerated intensity of the colours. The effect of HDR or of a filter? Or did you add another sky?
I would have kept it simplier, softening the sky rather than enhancing it. The landscape on the foreground is rich enough on its own...
I also think there is too much sharpness in general in this picture.
Did you think of posting this one in B&W? I've the feeling it would have been stronger, underlining the loneliness...
Of course, this is only my opinion. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 981 W: 61 N: 169] (29412)
  • [2008-11-14 8:02]

Suberb again ! Always the same good composition and WOW ! for this quality.
I would like Argentina and it's your fault Alejandro.


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