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sunset over Okura pier

sunset over Okura pier
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Copyright: Jack McGrane (jackal) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-12-09
Categories: Nocturnal
Camera: Pentax K10D, Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 DC EX HSM, Cokin Grad. ND 8
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2020-05-23 17:20
Viewed: 68
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Setting sun over Okura pier taken a few years ago.
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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 256 N: 2110] (13344)
  • [2020-05-24 1:41]

Hello Jack.
Nice point of view and beautiful colors on the sky!
I wish Okura bush be open again!
Best regards.


In my opinion, this is not a nice point of view but, yes, beautiful colors in the sky.
This low pov on the pier is disappointing, it unnecessarily takes a large part of the scene.
You can do better than that.
This result could have been interesting with a real intention, a thoughtful approach, but it is not the case.
Looking at the thumbnail I thought I saw lavender fields.

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