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low cloud
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Copyright: Jack McGrane (jackal) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-11
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Pentax K10D
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-10 18:24
Viewed: 1754
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another view of Mt Paku taken from Tairua.
I am not too sure about the composition of this one but I liked the low cloud around the Mount.
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Hi Jack, excellent shot, nice ratio of land and sky and fg. I liked the framing effect you got and the 'look' and pov is simply choice. TFS

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 647 W: 285 N: 2085] (13374)
  • [2007-12-10 18:58]

Aye Jack, this shot is worth a wee dram any day:)
Nice framing of the subject with the flax and the tree. Lovely lighting in the foreground too.
Good on ya mate,

You've filled the frame nicely with interesting bits and peices.
All in all it looks very nice.

Composition looks fine to me JAck and the cloud ring is exceptoinally captured. LOvely NZ colours and good detail. TFS,

HI Jack

I like the natural framing in this compo. Effective and a great idea. Well captured.


Hi Jack, the composition is fine - looks like early morning. I like how the sun it hitting the mist on Mt Paku yet the houses are still in shade. That means that Pauanui on the right then? The flax silhouettes look good too - well done

Hello Jack,

Bautiful composition, excellent colors and POV, well framed in natutal way. TFS

Best regards,

Hi Jack,
Nice composition.
Best regards,

Hi Jack
Beautiful view
Excellent distance

composition looks fine Jack, a very interesting place at natures best.i like the mountain with its low clouds around. you captured it well, sharpness and exposure are well executed.good job.
regards from Dubai.......andres

I really like the composition of the picture. Great colors, POV, lighting, and details.

The composition is fine Jack. However the "blocky" nearby plant and tree distract. I converted the image to tif and used a colour control point in Capture NX to add a little light to each.

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