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missing you...

missing you...
Photo Information
Copyright: Mandy MC (m4ndy85) (114)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-02
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon Powershot A75
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-28 21:22
Viewed: 2069
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Was taken while me and my friends were at Waiheke Island for the day
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Loi des tiers respectée, toutefois le fait que la dame soit a gauche de l'image m'agace un peu... il aurait été agréable qu'elle soit à droite pour que notre oeil soit tenté de regarder dans la même direction qu'elle.

Hi Mandy,
As I'm sure you are aware, as a general rule, photos look better when people are looking into them, rather than at the edge. In this case however I think we can make an exception. The title goes well with all aspects of this photo, it's compostition, the models expression and so on. It's a bit small but we can live with that.
Well done,

Hello Mandy
generally, I would have agree with Cindy and jako regarding the rule they refer to... but not this time...
In that case, the composition and the sad face of your friend make me think that she is leaving something (or someone... maybe the guy on the right in the water) and that's why she is leaving your picture too.

Technically, lightning is good (but a bit burned on her skin and overexposed on her bikini, we even loose its color)
the horizon is perfectly placed

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