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Crawl through nature


Crawl through nature
Photo Information
Copyright: Fiona Wecker (wackymob) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 485 W: 160 N: 955] (6851)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-06-15
Categories: Experimental, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D5100, Nikkor AF-S 55-300mm 1:4.5-5.6G ED VR
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2016-06-21 4:53
Viewed: 1373
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Took little miss for a crawl though the forest, seemed like a prettier alternative to the dirt and rocks on the hillside on sports day at school.
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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 790 W: 26 N: 808] (9654)
  • [2016-06-22 18:02]

Hi Fiona,
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I love this photograph, the really low PoV, the shallow DoF, the sunlight in the trees and the grass, the highlighter on her face - it adds up to wonderfull shot,
Cheers
Jack

Hello Fiona,
This is a beautiful photograph. However, I should like to make a few suggestions. I am sure you wanted this format, otherwise you would not have done it that way and I do not believe in imposing my own preferences on the photographer. But, quite a bit less top and bottom in my opinion, especially the OOF FG, would have made her more immediate. When I wander into nature I often regret not having taken pruning shears or at least a sharp pocket knife with me to get rid of objects like the brown one in the FG. But well done indeed. It is a pleasure to view.
Neels

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