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Let the sun shine in


Let the sun shine in
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Copyright: Fiona Wecker (wackymob) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 485 W: 160 N: 955] (6851)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-04-06
Categories: Transportation, Experimental, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D5100, Nikkor 18-55mm AF-S 1:3.5-5.6G VR, HOYA HMC UV (c) 52mm
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2014-04-18 4:12
Viewed: 957
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I know Pete said to skip the shadow if it didnt feel right but I already had this one done and after an early morning (as in 2am)call to say a sweet part of our lives had finally passed away, I decided not to mess around with it just now..She loved the old girls so I will leave it as is for her..

I had to relace the bg first as it was in a crowded spot at the show, then do the frame etc..I dont mind the cars shadow but I think the one on the frame is garbage..Will have to try and take a shot of my frame with some shadows of their own..The car was taken early in the morning..I skipped the data as it was for the frame. And yes I just remembered I hadnt tried to get rid of the yellow car through the window...


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Beautiful car! I wouldn't mind driving one of these. Good lighting and sharp details. Well done, tfs.

Hi Fiona…nice creative presentation…good tones and colors…great light.

Roger

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  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1833 W: 317 N: 3045] (23928)
  • [2014-04-18 13:03]

I love the creative journey you are undertaking.

stv

i can appreciate the limitations of both your computer and software Fiona.

This is a good effort...but, the frame is too big, it overpowers the car.

To achieve a better effect, the car's right hand fender should also protrude outside the frame.

I've done a rough workshop for you to illustrate what I mean.

It should be self explanatory.

Pete.

PS, note I took the shadow off 5the frame.

Hi Fiona,
Another great presentation with some good pp work, well done.
erwin...

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1089 W: 589 N: 1943] (14753)
  • [2014-04-19 7:44]
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One word of advice Fiona, this effect can get Habit Forming :-)
Another very well done trial, for your 2nd.try your obviously getting the hang of OOB,& with your talent & Pete's tuition, you'll soon be the master. Nice Excalibur too.

Cheers

Ron

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