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No War
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Copyright: necla erikci (ayse51) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2092 W: 144 N: 2110] (27563)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2014-05-26
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon PowerShot G10
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/13 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-11-18 1:56
Viewed: 1392
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Peace at home,peace in the world.
M.Kemal Atatürk.
Tabanca ve şarjörlerden oluşmuş bir müzik aleti.Ona Boston Güzel Sanatlar müzesinde rastladım.Günümüz olaylarını göz önüne alırsak bence en önemli yapıtlardan biriydi.

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Hello Necla! Good idea, good theme, minimalistic composition. Perefct exposure and capture. Good sharpness. Well done!

Bom dia Necla,
We work both today with beautiful and challenging ways.
Let me congratulate you for the outcome.
R.

Hi Necla

Please understand that this is my opinion only and not meant to offend. Many may disagree with me anyway.
When taking a photo of still life you have all the time you need and can get settings and composition perfect. Of course, as we are amateurs, most of us don't achieve perfection. With this image, the first thing that strikes me is that the composition has had no thought put into it. Its a boring straight on shot. I think the least you could have done was to have the instrument at an angle, which might have given the image some dynamism and made it more interesting. There is little detail in the instrument at the top right of it. But its difficult with this colour. But you did have all the time you needed. I also think the background colour doesn't help the image. The instrument itself (made of weapons) could have been more interesting.
Sorry to be so negative.
You may want to consider commenting on other member's photos a little more.

INDEED Peace at home,peace in the world.
NO more crying tunes for world.
This is one the great POV of the week BRAVO NECIA ERIKCI

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