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Venice, CA., #11

Venice, CA., #11
Photo Information
Copyright: Don Michael Brown (fromthehip) Silver Note Writer [C: 0 W: 0 N: 48] (340)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2015-04
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Leica M4, Leica Summicron 50/2, Kodak 400Tx, Heliopan SH-PMC UV Protection
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2015-05-09 18:02
Viewed: 683
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Lines and Lines, (not ques), butt so many lines to chose from in Venice, California...,

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Hello Don Michel! I'm trying to guess what is the keynote of this photograph and I can not draw a single conclusion. I have the impression that the photograph became accidentally pressed the shutter leaving the camera in the bag. I think you had better effect if you had stepped back three steps and simply photographed these people.

Don Michael

What I like with your photos, it's like watching a movie for the second time, I see things that I did not see at first.
The lines are present and I like this unconventional pov.
The man with sneakers and shadow of the bike bring dynamism. Interesting reading.

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