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South Haven Lighthouse


South Haven Lighthouse
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Copyright: Larry A Brechner (brech) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 135 N: 1111] (3045)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-10-23
Categories: Architecture, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Canon EOS 5D MKII, Canon EF 70-200 f/2.8 L IS USM, Circular Polarizer
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Map: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Lighthouses of the World [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2011-11-27 11:13
Viewed: 2200
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I have been working toward photographically collecting all the lighthouses of the Great Lakes for my web site, and maybe for a gallery exhibit or book. South Haven lighthouse is on the west coast (east shore) of Lake Michigan, and is a shortened version of the Muskegon lighthouse further north.

Every time I have been on location to shoot the South Haven (Michigan) lighthouse, the light, the weather, or some other circumstance made it less than ideal, and any images I made were not optimum.

This day was partly sunny, with a bit of haze making the sky a dull bluish-grey. While this one is still not the perfect image (would have liked some clouds in a blue sky), I thought it enough merit to process it.

Shot from the beach using the 1.4x extender on the lens in RAW file format, PP began with PS RAW adjustments to the basic color image. Using NIK Viveza, I made overall color balance adjustments, adding structure, and some minor exposure/brightness/contrast balance. Then back in PS, I made layer selections of the FG water and the BG sky to balance their exposure with the lighthouse and pier. I also cloned out several people standing on the pier. For the conversion to monochrome, I returned to NIK Silver Efex and processed the image adding a vignette and copper/duotone to the image. In PS made some further minor adjustments.

The color version is posted in the Workshop.

Teresat, fransx, shelbeesmom, CSP, daisydaisy, VicZik, mvdisco, chrisJ, eosnut, gaillarde, parasbhalla, loribird, KurtPop has marked this note useful
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Olá Larry
Good photo with a good perspective, interesting theme and excellent B/W choice.
Um abraço
teresa
Ps I have seen now thw WS..I like your B/w choice en more...the contrast goes very well.

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  • fransx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2938 W: 134 N: 7397] (41704)
  • [2011-11-27 11:20]

Hi Larry,
A splendid capture of this majestic Light House in such an adequate sepia treatment to render a sort of old photograph. I like the vignette around the frame. Great details in the structure and the waves with surf indicating a windy ambient.
Well done for this neat work.
Regards,

Francis Xavier

Very nice work Larry!! Excellent sharpness and the mono-tone works very well here! I love the vignetting, it adds a nice dimension to the shot, pulling the focus more center.
B-)
Linda

Greetings Larry,
I like the results you got with this image,to me the effect also pre dates the lighthouse,the photo appears as though it was taken many years ago.I like the sharpness & clarity of details. If you had left an individual in this scene,would it have given a good feel ,for the scale of the pier & building or not?
I also like your colour version in the WS,& noted that you would have liked to have had a cloudy sky in the scene.Hope you don't mind,I did a WS & added some blue sky & clouds,let me know what you think.Oops WS limit has been reached,will post it tomorrow.
Best Regards
Ron

Hi Larry...you are very good with Silver Efex as well as layer masking.. This shot reflects your excellent pp work. Nice job.

Roger

Larry

I saw the WS and I prefer this one , is more artistic.
Amazing perspective due to a perfect pov.
Excellent pp work here. I like this atmosphere.
The sharpness is also very good.

Hi Larry ,
Excellent composition , very great work ! Congratulations ! Ernest .

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  • VicZik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 528 W: 82 N: 950] (4812)
  • [2011-11-27 12:33]

Hi Larry,
Nice POV and PP work, I like the vignette and the LH position, teh B/w tone of color and contrast is good... TFS

Best

Vic

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1929 W: 117 N: 3017] (13240)
  • [2011-11-27 12:50]

Ola Larry
wonderful photo, very sharp, with a great light and contrast,a very well balanced composition, and a beautiful b/w presentation.
My best regards, mb

Hi Larry, wish I had some of the software you use , you keep bringing out some great shots. I have to agree some clouds would have added a little something extra but still a great shot.Looks a bit windy on the water. Fiona

Hi Larry, this is a well captured photo of this lighthouse with an interesting walkway.. b&w suits works well too. I'll add it to my theme, thanks..

aK

Awesome capture and good job in creating this wonderful image especially that it is in B&W. Nice wave action which goes will with the function of the lighthouse. Good pov and dof with nice contrast. Well done, tfs.

Hi Larry,
A beautiful perpective and great composition in Black & white with a nice contrast and light,
Excellent point of view and details,
a well taken picture of this lighthouse,
compliments,
Michel

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4430 W: 637 N: 9632] (55124)
  • [2011-11-27 18:42]

Olá Larry

Good graphism here with excellent sharpness & tonal range. The lighthouse is well positioned on the 1/3 golden mean. Maybe a slight cw rotation as it leans to the left. I like the repetition of the lights & support 'legs' of the catwalk. Tfs!

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 647 W: 285 N: 2085] (13374)
  • [2011-11-27 20:13]

Hi Larry,
I like your processing here, it has given the scene an atmosphere more befitting a lighthouse, rather than a sunny day.
Like you, I prefer land/seascapes to have no people, but I wonder, had you left maybe one person to indicate scale?
Cheers,
Pete.

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  • rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 736 W: 13 N: 634] (21244)
  • [2011-11-27 22:59]

Beautiful and interesting construction, I like the repetition of pylons and lamps, well composed photo
regards
Ryszard

Hello,the very stylish approach here turns this scene into a fine piece of graphic art.Best regards,Otto.

What a wonderful POV you have chosen to capture this scenic location, Larry!

Great focus and sharpness with amazing color tones.
The DOF is well done, and a light adds "drama" into the scene is well captured.
Great job!

Kind regards,
Paras

Very good shot and workshop and vignete.Pajo,Serbia.

Great shot Larry! Beautiful presentation taking us to another era. Well done!
TFS and have a great weekend, Lori

Many strong repetitive lines and patterns in this shot made stronger by the use of monochrome and vignetting. Nice work
regards
David

Lab,
The vignetting works very well here as well as your positioning of the lighthouse.
I like the effects of the waves, that appear frozen, due to your faster shutter speed.
Both a great shot and well done PP work.

Kurt

Hi Larry,

This is a nice post processing work that results in a very different mood comparing to the color version. Although I still like your original image without the clouds too.

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  • girni Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 13] (398)
  • [2012-10-04 11:43]

hello
belle perspective et détails des vagues en +;
joli noir et blanc
Nicole

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