<< Previous Next >>

First place where I lived


First place where I lived
Photo Information
Copyright: Michael Porterfield (mporterf) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 69 W: 93 N: 141] (1022)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-24
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/5.0
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday theme 2010/4/30: "Where I have lived" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2010-04-30 8:56
Viewed: 5843
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a shot from 2008 when I went on a literal walk down memory lane with my mom. We visited the first apartment I lived in until I was four (here). I shot it from this angle to give it the impression it would have on a 4-year old—imposing.
Royaldevon has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
None
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Hello Michael,

You have certainly made this imposing, even for adults!

I do like your composition.
You have created the most delightful arrangement of triangles, clearly defining the rule of thirds. Triangles are extremely strong shapes and impose this strength in photgraphis. Whilst the building itself gives the impression of being triangular, there are three such shapes surrounding it.
The focus is sharp in the f/g with a gradual blurring into the distance. Good light and nicely saturated.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF