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Coming Home
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Copyright: Ken Kowalski (Taipan) (32)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-13
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/4.1, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-14 19:58
Viewed: 1656
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Away from the Colorado Rockies for ten years, Dayne comes home.
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To rychousmama: Thanks so much!!Taipan 1 03-14 22:23
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Really lovely simple note and interesting story and idea here. I like the clarity and crispness of the shot, the lighting, and that beautiful scenery. I will make a couple of suggestions: try selecting Dayne with the lasso tool in Photoshop and brighten him a bit, while toning down the brightness in the background, since his features, and thus his identity and how it relates to his home, are a little lost with the slight backlighting emphasizing silhouette or shape more than features and textures. Try cropping about an inch and a half off of the right side so that there's more visual focus on the relationship between Dayne and the background. Beautiful tones though, and great idea and concept. TFS!
-Lara

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