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Photo Information
Copyright: Sandi Morales (LadyEgypt) (174)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon EOS Elan 7NE, Ilford HP5 Plus 400
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-11 12:14
Viewed: 2239
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A portrait of my good friend. A beauty she is. This was done film. Although I have a digital camera. I will never stop using film. Its classic.
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Very good portrait shot. The lighting is superb. I also like how you developed it. The tones are even. Composition wise, I think it may be better if the eyes are more visible. But that is just an opinion. I love this picture. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Treklens!

Cheers,

Pierre

Well done photo with careful lighting. Thanks for sharing and welcome to TrekLens!

Nice way to start!! I miss a note though.

I agree with previous opinion... Photo would be nicer if you should a liitle more or less the face. The amount you chose is a bit disturbing for me.

JCNunes

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  • Suerte Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 494 W: 59 N: 227] (3032)
  • [2006-10-11 12:58]

Welcome to TL!great BW work!wonderful pose, great mood!well done!
tfs

hello Sandi, welcome to TL!!

Great lightining here, and i like this composition.
The tones are also beautiful, did you use alittle editing software for the,?

Anyway, nice to see a photo taken on film!!!

welcome to tl this is very strong entry, we hope to see more great photo from you. enjoy your stay-jon

reminds me of a janet jackson cover album. very dramatic in black and white. good choice and good job.

OK, so what's this? No note, just questions: is it you or your model? If this is you, is this self-portret or someone did this picture? Does she always wait naked? (for me this is a mismatch: titlephoto)
Apart from that i liked it, but it could be bigger (~700 pixels in height). Nice shadows and good idea with source of light.
To sum up: a note is the key.

Welcome to TL!!
Cheers
Wlodek

Welcome to TrekLens!
Very bold and moody portrait. Very "arty" in its composition and lighting and pose.
Unfortunately her almost-exposed breast is very distracting, due to the strong light.
Overall, nice work
Rew

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 788 W: 52 N: 418] (10434)
  • [2006-10-12 8:13]

hi Sandi. Welcome to TL. Striking 1st pic. :)
very nice in Black and White. TFS.
>points later

Shogun

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1816 W: 39 N: 465] (4859)
  • [2006-10-12 15:11]
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An interesting monochrome composition has been posted. Well illumined and exposing subject. Ērisp details have been captured. Attractive pose a pretty model. But.....

Something is missing in this portrait, I wonder why?

TFS.

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