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Philipes Downtown LA, CA., USA


Philipes Downtown LA, CA., USA
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Copyright: Don Michael Brown (fromthehip) Silver Note Writer [C: 0 W: 0 N: 48] (340)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-03
Categories: Food
Camera: Leica M4, Leica Summicron 50/2, Ilford HP5+, Heliopan SH-PMC UV Protection
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-11-25 11:23
Viewed: 1231
Points: 1
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If you want good pulled pastrami sandwiches and coffee for 10 cents then look no further then this place in downtown LA, CA., USA

DM Brown
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  • Dai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 189 W: 56 N: 247] (1214)
  • [2011-11-25 11:44]
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Hi Don
I like this type of journalistic-type photography, but in this image your main subject, the lady in the foreground, is too dark. Try using your photographic software to lighten the area around the lady and increase contrast a little, that will help the image greatly.
Your focus is great, nice and sharp; and the bustle in the background tells its own story.
Thanks for sharing
Dai

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