Maid of Honor
|Copyright: bill white (sappert12) (81)|
|Medium: Black & White|
|Date Taken: 2011-05-20|
|Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds|
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|Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop|
|Date Submitted: 2011-05-23 4:16|
|[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note|
|Posted this once but was able to take the info some of you gave and eddited a small flaw. Thanks. This is a pic of the maid of honor prior to getting ready for the weddding. She is waiting for her turn at rehersal.|
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Hi Bill...beautiful girl...I don't think there was a flaw on your part yesterday but rather a tense look on the part of the girl. If you get a chance take some more shots of her on a day when she is more relaxed.
I like the concept here. I did a woekshop for more of a rule of thirds and some pp work.
It's a nice shot. Perhaps lacking a little in sharpness, especially on her eyes, but the way the light hits her and leaves the background subdued is exquisite.
I do think this could be more closely cropped without any loss to the impact - there's just too much space IMO.
- [2011-05-24 16:15]
You have a great model here, good light and excellent tonal range. The lack of sharpness is a major fault, and I see no reason to place your model in the dead center of the image. Cropping top and right would help.