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Maid of Honor


Maid of Honor
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Copyright: bill white (sappert12) (81)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2011-05-20
Categories: Event
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2011-05-23 4:16
Viewed: 1428
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Posted this once but was able to take the info some of you gave and eddited a small flaw. Thanks. This is a pic of the maid of honor prior to getting ready for the weddding. She is waiting for her turn at rehersal.

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Hi Bill...beautiful girl...I don't think there was a flaw on your part yesterday but rather a tense look on the part of the girl. If you get a chance take some more shots of her on a day when she is more relaxed.

Roger

Hello Bill

I like the concept here. I did a woekshop for more of a rule of thirds and some pp work.

JImmy

It's a nice shot. Perhaps lacking a little in sharpness, especially on her eyes, but the way the light hits her and leaves the background subdued is exquisite.

I do think this could be more closely cropped without any loss to the impact - there's just too much space IMO.

Nice shot!

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  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 195 W: 4 N: 64] (587)
  • [2011-05-24 16:15]

You have a great model here, good light and excellent tonal range. The lack of sharpness is a major fault, and I see no reason to place your model in the dead center of the image. Cropping top and right would help.

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