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Copyright: Lisa Williams (lisapw1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 102 N: 1602] (8893)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-05-20
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-06-02 17:48
Viewed: 2241
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I went to a Strawberry Festival about 15 miles away from my home. I did not pick these berries as they only were allowing children to pick them during the festival. I will go at another date to pick berries. They are absolutely delicious.

I darkened a tad, resized, and sharpened for upload.

Thank you for your comments and critiques, Lisa

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To shelbeesmom: Excellent brightness?atomas59 2 06-04 14:05
To atomas59: thank youlisapw1 3 06-03 05:47
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Hmmm, little problem with exposure here, by darkening it did restore a certain balance in the medium and darktones...but still the highlights are lost. And your highlight occupy a lot of the frame space.. farther more, the strawberry looks unaturaly dark as they are actually flooded with direct light. I think this shot could have been captured in a better way.

De-lish!! I love the ANGLES here Lisa....very nice...so much better than squared up shooting! Excellent brightness here and sharpness! Got any chocolate sauce?
I'll be right over....

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2011-06-03 6:21]


mangigique image de ces belle fraises dans son panier, tu nous fais envie, superbe ocmpo splendide.

Bravo et amitié


Hi Lisa,

I love this, the colours and subject draw the eye immediately. The composition is good, using the diagonal and the detail on the fruit excellent. There is slight OE on the bottom right side but I don't really think it detracts from the image generally and I do think the fruit looks natural.




I love this pov ! I also like the table, the red and green go very well together.
I feel the sun here, strawberries are beautiful and well developed.
C'est très appétissant :-)

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