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Time's Toll


Time's Toll
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Copyright: Werner Dirla (werdir) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1416 W: 147 N: 2654] (11957)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2010-10-21
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon D90, AF-S DX VR Nikkor 18-105mm f/3.5-5.6G ED, 67 mm Hoya UV
Exposure: f/18.0, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2010-11-24 15:45
Viewed: 1480
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Time marches on, wearing on everyone and everything. Not that I would want to, but one can't venture out on this old pier any more. Opulence on one side of the boardwalk, this on the other.

Slight crop, converted to B&W, Bumped-up contrast a bit, applied a cartoon filter to add some grittiness, applied an unsharp mask.

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  • Teresat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3410 W: 96 N: 3821] (15934)
  • [2010-11-24 16:05]

Olá wener
Interesting composition and good B/W work. A pier wave!
Um abraço
teresa

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 13 N: 1404] (6384)
  • [2010-11-24 16:11]
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Hi Werner,
nice shot of this old structure left to decay and being battered by the elements, nice B&W post with good tone and contrast, a little under exposed for my eyes, I would have preferred to see a little more detail in the wood but that's just me...Nice composition using the bottom third of frame. What does the cartoon filter do? I have not came across that one before. Have a great day. Best wishes
Bri

Hi Werner.
Your relatively low POV creates a beauitful eye level effect with nice 2/3 framing,the B&W mood works and support your note,very good sharpness and well balanced exposure.
Best Wishes
mushtaq

like this one Werner very atmospheric image like the work the filter has done here
tfs regards bryan

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 633 W: 11 N: 1379] (8213)
  • [2010-11-26 2:50]

Hi Werner,I love the mood of this image in b/w.Very well chosen POV, perfectly composed.
Regards Rose

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2777 W: 0 N: 5194] (50772)
  • [2010-11-27 10:35]

Hello,

Très beua contraste et rendu, sueprbe, ce pont debois dans le mouvement de l'eau, ce brillant, quelle iamge.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Boa Tarde Werner,
That's a great shot and awesome allegory.
Very, very good,
R.

Hello Werner!
Amazing abandoned pier. Amazing Black and White work.
Good point of view and minimalistic composition.
Perfect contrast and sharpness. ideal cut. Great effect.
Well done!

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