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soon, the witching hour


soon, the witching hour
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Copyright: Linda Logan (zenitlady) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 2 N: 43] (288)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2011-10-22
Categories: Humorous
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2011-10-24 20:57
Viewed: 1130
Points: 2
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As the big night approaches, let me wish you a happy and safe All Hallow's Eve!
Flash.
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  • VicZik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 528 W: 82 N: 950] (4812)
  • [2011-10-24 21:36]

Hi Linda.... Good colors... did you really need to include the pots on the left? It took away from the photo... But I like the picture any how...

Hi Linda. I've got to be honest with you - the direct flash makes for a very poor photo! See how the face of the figurine is burnt-out and glary and how there are deep black shadows thrown.

Best way to solve this is to put a few layers of tissue paper over the flash and you'll get better, diffused and more even lighting.
Also the BG and surrounds are distracting - just the witch and pumpkin would be better!!!

Rgds
DAvid

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