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JoŽl's Haircut


JoŽl's Haircut
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Copyright: Andre Holdrinet (Andre-H) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 40 W: 1 N: 30] (399)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2002-10
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Portrait
Camera: Pentax Spotmatic SPII, 50mm f/1.4, Ilford FP4 Plus 125
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-31 13:11
Viewed: 2000
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a photo of my brother getting a haircut from a friend, taken in Vancouver a few years back.

Since the original post, I have learned how to use Photoshop more or less effectively, and have touched this picture up a little, obtaining a result which I think is far more pleasing. I cloned out a towel rack and a couple other distracting and irrelevant details. I also increased contrast, and brought out more details, and then slightly sharpened the whole.

I like the expressions on both their faces, which are focused on the matter at hand, and the background lighting and shadows seem to me very pleasant.

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Hi Andre, seems to be a lot of noise here and not much clarity. The expression was good, though, and nice subject. TFS.

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 7 N: 1012] (5621)
  • [2007-03-31 14:32]

wow! thats gotta be romantic... very romantic...

a girl giving a guy a haircut... something i call 'heaven'...

lucky guy, and thanks for sharing :) :)

muhammad muhsin

very creative... great expressions... nice PP job...

Well done

JCNunesô
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